2010-05-28 [LynnAnneBrown]: ooooopppps sorry moira, i didn't mean to delete you comment. Just pushed the wrong button is all
2010-05-28 [moira hawthorne]: sorite... you read it tho so you know... thats all that matters...
2010-05-30 [9jlriexqk,ktpk]: Had a quick look at some of your works here-they look very interesting. I'll be back to post a crit soon!
2010-05-30 [LynnAnneBrown]: Thankyou, I know they are long and quite winding. And they could also use a bit of editing. But since all but the first piece were a result of an ongoing five day wrestling match with the muse, which only ended two days ago, I am going to give it a week or more before returning to them with fresh eyes.
By then it will be helpful to know if there are some dreadful gaps or areas were things get so confusing that they fail to communicate. Because as you must know, sometimes what you think you are saying isn't how you have made yourself heard.